Monday, September 29, 2014

College essay

I’m Loving It
All Child in my family wants to study abroad. Not in place we’re raised and born, in Indonesia. All my siblings have done it, started it in college/university. Either me, started it at high school. I am the last sibling. I have all eyes on me, feel covered, I know what I have to do because somebody tell me, I’m never lost. Since high school is a place for experience experiments of the professional network. It has been my place to proceed blending with culture. Founding who I am. I pushed for provision myself where high school couldn’t give to me. I turn into no even one eye on me, feel naked, I know what I have to do cause I pushed to be an initiative person.
        I realized that people are valued people. Honestly, I have to build characters in me. and get appearance to reflect it, simulating society? I said I’m trying and changing.  I cannot use the “I don’t know” girl. I minimized my clumsy things. Its going like life threatening. I’m strong chasing what I want, than wait it come to me. I’m not the first rank to be a scientist, I’m not the prettiest to be a top model and I’m not any winner to be a great leader. What can I do are adding my skills and experiences. Make it balance accordingly with my academic.
I’m dancing. Traditional and Contemporary dance. Active for 4 years. Basically, 3 times practices a week. If there was an event, I practice everyday, almost days from day to night. I'm not a confident person until I got my 13 place of one island champion after first 2 months practices. That a huge achievement for me. Finally i can do something well with my own. Years later I got my first, second, third place. First call invitation to be a talent. First wedding performance. First people asked for contact card. First school event.  And as group handles it. For that matter, I prided every single time we were spent for being pioneers of single developing group.
Everyone was sacrificed their time, energy, mind and soul, didn’t count the monies. Capital budget is the first thing to become a great artist. Come home almost midnight, had fought with whole home residents "how many they pay you for that?". Skipping classes. Cancelled other activities. If one has an ego it's mean end to others, plan changed. At least we have done our obligation when had said, "I'm in", seeing from the law glasses. In fact, mine was a small room within huge offices building without any law bonded. But I'm about to build a trustiness and commitment between people and me, priceless. Some period I was responsible to the group. Responsible about the member technique, memorizing the step, music, custom, properties, administration, consume, time accuracy and member presenting. I work with people who not the have the same age with me. Few have first languages that are not same with me. That is how I grow up and see the real lives going.
I have ever been a secretary of student council. I learnt how to organize and managed. So they were not wrong or mass up recording. Not loose or broken any document. This organization also made an annual event such as Bazaar, donation for orphans, exhibition, sport and art match with a different theme every year. I always participated these events with different divisions, secretary, documentary, logistic, consume and prize. I got more challenging when I was a part timer waitress at a restaurant. Everything has to be fast, direct, active and friendly. Oh I’m expert the last thing, friendly, cause I know how to be polite, still further from the rest. Time is I ever needed to complete the task.
I have a traveler family. Beside my family have spread members, my parent love discovering new places. Travelling show me the essence of tolerance. Travelling give my family a chance to have a more intense relationship. Our parent is not a typical of direct educator parent, they are shown to us. They never seek our daily routine, we shown then. What to be shown must be the uppermost of us. Doubtless, they appreciated originally. I wonder, maybe they knew things always went the way we want to. Unexpectedly, my parent had a conversation with their peers, we heard them, praises us extraordinary. As might be expected, to be a not greedy, not easily satisfied and independent person happened to us.
From famous little innocent girl attitude sticked on me. I'm doubt my self can do this aboard high school life. But I can not wait until I do not have anyone than try making an effort. What makes me have more capacity than all my siblings?. High school is growing up, meeting new people, get stronger, lots or lose time, makeup or no makeup, tear or laugh, sloth or leader. High school’s years times I want to be back 30 years later. Young and still digging both stretching. I've met with exhausted, commitment, teamwork, trustiness, loyalty from my experiences. I do not need faking society. I'm trying and changing to be more me. That person who I will present when involving and developing at abroad cultural college. I was inspired by my dance teacher. He said that I will could if I usually of it. Yet I gave a forced. Indeed my forced was based on how I'm loving it.


What makes a winning college essay ?
A winning college essay is .. You write something that still could interesting and surprise the writer. Surprise your self !!

Hi! It was an assigment. Wdyt? It was my longest essay i've ever made ! Puftt definite verbs and grammars :(. I bought a book last week about 'powering your words'. Didn't have enough time to read it while doing this essayyy